高考英语满分作文Green Action in Our Class

　　英语作文，是指用英语针对某一内容写出一篇文章;是英语考试最常见的一种题目类型。今天学习啦小编要与大家分享的是：高考英语满分作文《Green Action in Our Class》范文。具体内容如下:

　　【试题回放】

　　情景作文

　　假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为响应绿化祖国的号召，你班四月十二日去郊区植树，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍植树活动的全过程，给某英文杂志的“绿色行动”专栏写一篇以“Green Action in Our Class”为题的英文稿件。

　　注意：词数不少于60

　　提示词：郊区suburbs

　　【满分作文】

Green Action in Our Class

　　April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day. In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately. Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and planting young trees. Others were watering . After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees. Before leaving we took some photos to record our green action. Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. We feel it’s our duty to protect and beautify our environment.

　　【名师点评】

　　本文是设计巧妙的提纲要点式作文，与环保结合，立意较好。文章思路清晰，要点连贯，在语言的表达上选词新颖，同时运用了分词短语作状语等较好的句式表达。

　　【阅卷老师点评】

　　亮点1：正确使用原因状语从句，如“…because our class had a meanineful experience on thatday.”。

　　亮点2：正确使用了难度较大的介词短语，如upon arrival，after getting the work done，beforeleaving等，把时间概念交代得十分清楚。

　　亮点3：正确使用并列句式，如“Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and plantingyoung trees. Others were watering them.”句意丰富，富有表现力。

　　亮点4：正确使用现在分词作状语，如seeing the lines of trees等，句式灵活。
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　　《Green Action in Our Class》优秀范文一

　　On April 12th, our class went to plant trees in suburban area. It was a sunny day and temperature was moderate. The place we were heading to weren't far from our school, and because of environmental protection, we all rode bikes and it took us approximately an hour to reach our destination. We cooperated with each other to plant the trees. After we finished our planting, we built up a sign that has some words, "protect trees", on it. After we finished, we asked a local person to take a photo of us. We were so joyful and delighted that we got this great opportunity to protect environment ourselves. Thanks for the communist party that offered us the chance to experience the feeling of nature

　　《Green Action in Our Class》

　　Our class decided to plant trees on suburbs on April 12th. It was a sunny day,and my classmates and I rode bikes to the suburbs. On our way, we laughed and sang songs happily. On arriving there, we dug holes and planted trees into them before we watered them. In order to remind people to look after them well, we set up a sign which read "Please Protect the Trees." After having finished our work, we took a photo together as a memorial. We acquire something more than knowledge and satisfaction_it's the awareness of our responsibility. What an enjoyable and meaningful day!