高考英语满分作文真题范文3篇
高考英语满分作文真题范文一
【试题回放】
实现有效的沟通,建立良好的人际关系,不仅要善于言表,更要学会倾听。请你根据下表中所提供的信息,写一篇题为 “Being a Good Listener” 的英文演讲稿。
注意:
1、对所给要点,逐一陈述,适当发挥,不要简单翻译。
2、词数150左右。开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。
3、演讲稿中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。
Good afternoon, everyone.
The topic of my speech today is “Being a Good Listener”.
Good listening can always show respect, promote understanding, and improve interpersonal relationship.
Many people suggest that parents should listen more to their children, so they will understand them better, and find it easy to narrow the generation gap; teachers should listen more to their students, then they can meet their needs better, and place themselves in a good relationship with their students; students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.
What I want to stress is that each of us should listen to others. Show your respect and never stop others till they finish their talk; show you are interested by a supportive silence or a knowing smile; be open-minded to different opinions even though you don’t like them. In a word, good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other.
Thank you for your listening!
【名师点评】
这是一篇感情真挚、热情洋溢的演讲稿,文中大量运用排比句型,不但准确流畅地表达出题目中所提供的信息,而且体现出作者熟练运用英语的能力以及不俗的文采。第三段中所使用的相同结构的复合句式,将倾听的对象及其作用阐述得淋漓尽致;而第四段中用一系列的祈使句议论应如何倾听,则更进一步地增强了这篇演说稿的说服力。
高考英语满分作文真题范文二
作文题目:
最近,你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是:公园要不要收门票?请你根据下表所提供的信息,给报社写一封信,客观地介绍讨论情况。
60%的同学认为:
1.不应该收门票
2.公园是公众休闲的地方
3.如收门票,需建大门、围墙,会影响城市形象
40%的同学认为:
1.应收 门票,但票价不要太高
2.支付园林工人工资
3.购新花木
注意:
1.信的开头已为你写好。
2.词数:100左右。
3.参考词汇:门票---entrance f ee
范文:
Dear editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. 60% of us schoolmates think t hat an entrance fee do not meet people’s expectations, for a park is considered to be a place where the public can have a good time when they are not busy either a t home or at work. If an entrance fee must be paid by the visitors for a park, it will be necessary to build a gate and surrounding walls. In the end a city will take on a bad look. 40% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee can be accepted, but it must not be too expensive. The money from ticket selling can be used for paying the gardeners in the par k and buying some other kinds of flowers and trees.
With regard to myself, I think an entrance fee is useful, for it can be used to protect a park. Do we share the same opinion, dear editor?
Yours truly,
Li Hua
高考英语满分作文真题范文三
假设你是红星中学高三(1)班的学生李华,请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,用校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文,记述你和同学们向学校提建议,解决自行车存放问题的过程。
There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school.
注意:
1. 词数不少于 60.
2. 短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
考点:考察看图作文
写作指导:
本文属于看图作文。叙述的是李华和同学们向学校建议解决自行车存放的问题。属于记叙文,使用第一人称和一般过去时。
要点:
1.在自行车存放处前面,我看见很多人都拥挤在一起;
2.找到几个同学一起讨论具体解决方法。
3.找到校长提出建议;
4.校方采纳建议,多开了一个进出的门。
看图作文要求考生将画面所包含的有效信息直接运用英语思维转换成英语语言文字,再根据这些要点谋篇布局。要求考生把看到的图画用文字表达出来,除了能表达清楚图画中的信息外,考生还需要根据词数要求,适当拓展并发挥想象,从而使文章的叙述不单调。如果是记叙文类的写作素材,考生要注意故事的时间、地点、人物、事件的起因、过程、结果这六个要素。
【一句多译】
在我们学校自行车存放处有一个长久以来就存在的问题。
(1)There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school
(2)The parking place for bikes was an existing problem for a long time in our school。
【参考范文】
One possible version
There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school, I noticed the entrance was small and almost blocked. So my classmates and I had a discussion and wrote a report. Then we went to meet the schoolmaster in his office and gave the report to him. He accepted our suggfestions. Soon afterwards, a second entrance was opened to the parking place. Now it is easy to park our bikes there.