高考英语满分作文带翻译

　　高考英语满分作文带翻译

　　【作文题目】假如你是李夏。你看到关国留学生Sharon 在网上发贴，.希望有人能帮助她提高普通话(Mandarin)水平，她可以教英语作为回报。请根据以下提示用英语给她写一封电子邮件。

　　1.表达给她提供帮助的意愿;

　　2.说明你能胜任辅导的理由;

　　3.给出讲好普通话的两点建议;

　　4.提出你学习英语的具体需求。

　　注意：

　　1. 词数120左右，开头语已为你写好;

　　2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;

　　3. 文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称。

　　范文1：　Hi Sharon,

　　This is Li Xia. I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin. I feel honored to have the chance to help you with your Mandarin learning and I am very happy to have you as my English teacher. I'm good at speaking standard Mandarin. I've been a broadcaster in the school’s broadcasting station for years. When it comes to how to speak fluent Mandarin, I suggest that you learn a bunch of pronunciation rules first, which are quite different from the English ones. Another suggestion is to practice speaking. As the saying goes, “Practice makes perfect”. However, my English is just OK and I have many problems with my study. I really hope that you can give me good advice on how to study English well. I believe we both can make much progress with each others’ help.

　　Thank you!

　　Li Xia

　　译文：

　　莎伦，你好：

　　我是李夏。我从你的帖子上看到你想提高普通话水平。我很荣幸有机会能帮你学习普通话，同时也很高兴你能做我的英语老师。我能说一口流利且标准的普通话。我在学校广播站担任广播员有好几年了。当谈到怎样能说一口流利的普通话，我建议你首先要学习一些发音规则，这些发音规则和英语发音规则完全不同。另一个建议就是口语练习。俗话说：“熟能生巧。”另外，我的英语水平很一般，在学习上也有很多问题。我真心希望你能给我一些关于如何学好英语的建议。我相信我们彼此在互相助之下，都能取得很大的进步。

　　谢谢!

　　李夏

　　范文2：Hi Sharon,

　　This is Li Xia. I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin. I am willing to help you with your Mandarin. As a native Chinese speaker, I can speak Chinese clearly and fluently, and my teachers think highly of my spoken Chinese. I have taught some foreigners Mandarin, which makes me have much experience in teaching.

　　As for speaking Mandarin, it’s better to pay much attention to the pronunciation. Besides, you must take notice of the handwriting. And you also should keep it in mind that comparing notes with your classmates frequently is a good way to improve your study.

　　In return l hope you can help me with my spoken English. When I speak English, I often feel a little nervous. Can you give me some advice on how to overcome that?

　　Looking forward lo hearing from you.

　　Li Xia

　　译文：

　　莎伦，你好：

　　我是李夏。我从你的帖子上看到你想提高普通话水平。我愿意帮助你的普通话。作为一个中国人，我可以清楚、流利地讲中文。我的老师们对我的中文口语有着高度的评价。我教过一些外国人的普通话，这让我在教学上有很多的经验。

　　至于说普通话，最好多注意发音。此外，你还必须注意书写。而且你也应该记住，与你的同学经常交换意见是一个改善你学习的好方法。

　　作为回报，我希望你能帮助我的英语口语。当我说英语的时候，我经常感到有点紧张。你能给我一些建议来克服这个问题吗?

　　期待收到你的来信。

　　李夏

　　范文3：

　　Hi Sharon,

　　This isLi Xia. I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin. I am quite interested in it. I think I’m fit for it. As a student, I have been learning Mandarin for many years. In addition, I am Chinese, which means Mandarin is a must for me to communicate with others in my daily life. So I’m quite confident that I can help you learn Mandarin.

　　Learning Mandarin takes time, so if you want to learn it well, you should spend much time practicing Mandarin everyday. As the saying goes, practice makes perfect. Besides, you can also read some books in Chinese, see some Chinese films and listen to some Chinese radio programmes. Speaking and listening are very important for language learning, by which you are sure to make great progress.

　　In your post, you say you can teach English as a reward. It is just what I want. I’m eager to improve my English. So, if you allow me to help you learn Mandarin, you can also help me improve my English. We can contact each other by video chat every night for half an hour in English and half an hour in Chinese, so that we can improve our oral speaking.

　　Hope for you early reply!

　　Yours Sincerely

　　Li Xia

　　译文：

　　莎伦，你好：

　　我是李夏。我从你的帖子上看到你想提高普通话水平。我对此很感兴趣。我认为我适合帮助你。作为一名学生，我已学习普通话多年。此外，我是中国人，这意味着我在日常生活中必需用普通话与他人沟通。所以我很有信心我可以帮助你学习普通话。

　　学习普通话需要时间，所以如果你想学好它，你应该每天花很多时间练习普通话。俗话说，熟能生巧。除此之外，你也可以读一些中文书，看一些中文的电影和听一些中文广播节目。对于语言学习来说，说和听非常重要。通过说和听，你一定会取得很大的进步。

　　在你的帖子中，你说你可以教英语作为回报。这正是我想要的。我渴望提高我的英语。所以，如果你允许我帮助你学习普通话，你也可以帮助我提高我的英语。我们可以每天晚上通过视频聊天保持联系，半个小时讲英语和半小时说中文，这样我们可以提高我们的口语。

　　希望早日收到你的回复!

　　此致

　　李夏