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  晚霞


  晚霞是柔美的;晚霞是缓慢的;晚霞是依依不舍的;晚霞还是俊俏恬静的……我喜欢贪婪地阅读晚霞的秀美。(一个“贪婪”就足以看出小作者对晚霞的神往和喜爱,第一小节的开篇就把我们拉进了一个诗意的世界,“柔美”“缓慢”“依依不舍”“俊俏恬静”这些不正是晚霞的特点吗?在小作者的笔下晚霞就是一首诗,就是一个人。)

  坐在家乡的田埂上,我托着下巴,静静的望着远处的天空。天空中,疲劳了一天的太阳也要休息啦,它将自己的被子缓缓盖上,光芒也不再那么刺眼了,而是变得柔和起来。忽然,天边的一丝云彩遮住了太阳的一部分,仿佛给它披上了一件随风飘逸的披风。但是它似乎不要,努力挣脱掉身上那件‘碍手碍脚’的衣裳。(小作者非常喜欢使用比喻的修辞手法,这样的运用十分恰当。瞧,云彩居然成了一件披风,多么形象啊。)

  终于,它成功了!

  不过,又有一些整块整块的大云彩缓缓的挪着脚步向它而来。这次,它怎么也弄不掉它们了。于是,它俏皮的拨开一点云层,将自己的头伸出来,双眼左看看,右看看,想在入睡前再看看这个世界。它坐在云彩上面,指挥着它们,渐渐向地平线飞去。太阳坐在仙境般的云椅上,享受着,环顾着这个它曾经照亮的世界。现在,霞光只剩下了一小半了,就像是天狗吃月亮一般,一点一点的消失在西方的天空。(这一段就写出了变化来,让这些变化真是地展现在了我们的眼前,景物一但有了变化,便有了生机)

  哦,晚霞就像是俊俏的舞女,在云雾飘渺之中展现她的风采;晚霞就像是奢享的皇帝,在金碧辉煌之中聆听优美的旋律;晚霞就像是光洁的玉盘,在云海之中放射它的光芒;晚霞就像是飘逸的丝巾,在风雨之中随意游动……晚霞啊,你是多么的变化无常。呵,一会儿光芒万丈,一会儿又收敛了许多,真令我眼花缭乱。(冷不丁地,俊俏的舞女就上场了,这一小节是全文最华彩的一章,一系列的排比,让人眼花缭乱;奇妙的想象,让人思绪万千)

  无意中,我喃喃的念起了唐代诗人李商隐的一首千古名诗:向晚意不适/

  驱车登古原/夕阳无限好/只是近黄昏。多好的一首诗啊,再看看今昔的晚霞,早已涂好了胭脂,准备去参加另一个盛大的舞会了……(末了,以诗收尾,前后呼应,让晚霞更加蒙上了一层诗的意味。全文感情真挚,小作者她真的爱晚霞,因此才能写出这么如梦如幻的晚霞来。相信我们读了之后也都想看看天空的晚霞吧!)

  又见圆明园第一次见到圆明园,是在儿时的一个夏天同奶奶一起去的。那是一个老大老大的园子,满眼的残垣断壁。掩在杂草丛中的乱石,上面刻着挺好看的花纹;一些粗大的石柱子,直挺挺地矗立着……不过是一座废墟。这里没有什么好看,可我不明白,怎么在那么多人来到这儿。

  时隔多年,如今,我又见到你了——依如往昔的圆明园。步入大门,顿有一种步入历史陈迹的感觉。最引人注目的是那残缺不全但仍高高挺立着的石柱,从石柱上雕刻着的图案,我看到了一座座富丽堂皇的殿堂;从石壁上黑色的痕迹我闻到了旷日持久的烟火味。我伸手抚摸着她,似乎听到了沉痛的诉说,她把我带到了那烟火漫天的一百五十年前:一伙强盗闯入园中,他们见到那么多奇珍异宝,就如饿狼一般,疯狂抢夺。能拿的都拿走了,不能运走的干脆统统毁掉,一场大火足足烧了三天三夜,于是一座世界珍园便从此失去了自己独有的光彩。

  这园子也似乎在诉说着清廷的无能,诉说着让人感到耻辱的一部任人宰割的近代史;中国人的隐痛一次又一次地在这里被剥揭……

  园子里栽了许许多多松树和柏树,它们苍萃挺拔的气势给人以极大的鼓舞。

  来这里参观的人很多。一位花白头发的老人注视着脚下的石壁陷入了沉思。他那饱经风霜的面庞映出圆明园百十年苍桑的历史。历史留给我们现代人的是无穷的力量和坚定的信念,中国要强大,一个强大的中国是不会被任意欺凌的,作为历史的圆明园,留给人们的思考很多。

  英文翻译

  Sunset glow

  Sunset is soft; the sunset is slow; sunset is reluctant; sunset was pretty quiet ...... I like reading avidly beautiful sunset. (A "greedy" Small enough to see the sunset author fascinated and loved, put the opening of the first section we pull into a poetic world, "soft", "slow", "reluctantly" "pretty quiet" These It features not yet sunset? sunset in a small author's pen is a poem, is a man.)

  Home sitting on the ridge, I chin, quietly looking at the distant sky. Sky, fatigue need to rest for a day of sun you, it will slowly cover their own quilt, light is no longer so glaring, but softened. Suddenly, the horizon of a cloud covered the part of the sun, as if to give it covered with a wind flowing cloak. But it seems to do, trying to break out Shenshangnajian 'underfoot' clothes. (The author would like to use the analogy little rhetorical devices, such use is appropriate. Look, the clouds actually become a cloak, how the image of ah.)

  Finally, it worked!

  However, there are a number of large clouds slowly move monolithic piece of footsteps coming towards it. This time, it is how can not afford to get them. Thus, it is a playful poke a little cloud, his head sticking out, his eyes left to see, right look, think before going to sleep and then look at the world. It sits above the clouds, in command of them, and flew to the horizon gradually. Sitting in Wonderland-like cloud sun lounger, enjoying, looking forward to this it had illuminated the world. Now, rays only less than half, like a Tengu eat the moon in general, little by little lost in the western sky. (This section will write the changes to make these changes really show in our eyes, but with a change of scenery, there was life)

  Oh, sunset like a handsome dancer, show her charisma among the misty clouds; sunset like a luxury enjoyed by the emperor, among the magnificent melodic listening; sunset like smooth jade plate, in the clouds in its light radiation; sunset like a flowing scarf, swimming freely in the wind and rain sunset ...... ah, how fickle you are. Oh, shining moment, while they convergence of many, really makes me confused. (Rather abruptly, handsome dancer on the play, this section is full of the most CLS chapter, a series of parallel, dazzling; wonderful imagination, makes a myriad of thoughts)

  Inadvertently, I murmured a song spoke the Tang Dynasty poet Li Shang-yin poetry through the ages: the evening among the Italian discomfort /

  Gordon drove the ancient original / sunset is infinitely good / but near dusk. How good a poem ah, look at the past and present of the sunset, had painted rouge good, ready to go to another grand ball of ...... (last, ending poetry, before and after the echo, so the sunset cast a more meaning of poetry thesis sincere feelings, she really loves small author sunset, so in order to write such a dreamy sunset to believe we read also want to see the sky after sunset it!)

  See also the first time I saw Yuanmingyuan Summer Palace, it is in a childhood summer with Grandma go together. It was a boss boss garden, eyeful ruins. In the weeds cover rocks inscribed with good looking pattern; some of the thick stone pillars, stood stiffly ...... but a ruin. There is not much to look at, but I do not understand how so many people come in here.

  After a lapse of many years, and now, I see you again - depending as ever Yuanmingyuan. Entered the door, there is a ton of feeling into the thing of the past. The most striking is that incomplete but still erect high stone pillars, carved from the stone pattern, I saw a magnificent hall seat; black marks from the cliff I smelled the protracted fireworks taste. I reach out and touch her, she seemed to hear painful to tell, she brought me that fireworks filled the one hundred and fifty years ago: a gang of robbers broke into the garden, and they see so many treasures, as hungry wolf, mad scramble. Both could get away, not taken away altogether all destroyed, a fire burned for three days and three nights, so Jane Park will be one of the world began to lose their own unique brilliance.

  This garden also seemed to tell Qing incompetence, telling people feel shame for a slaughter of modern history; Chinese people's pain again and again stripped to expose here ......

  Garden planted many pine and cypress, they pale Crafts tall momentum gives great encouragement.

  Many people come here to visit. A gray-haired old man watching the foot of the cliff, lost in thought. His weather-beaten face shone Cangsang Yuanmingyuan one hundred years of history. Modern history left us is boundless strength and conviction, China to be strong, a powerful China will not be any bullying as a history of the Summer Palace, leaving a lot of people thinking.

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