我的文具盒

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　　我的文具盒

　　的文具盒是一年前妈妈给我买的，虽然它已经“老”了，但我还是十分珍惜它。

　　我的文具盒是用铁皮做成的。拿在手里，首先映入眼帘的是上面的画。左边有一个趴在地上的大脸花猫，它脸上呈现出一种痛苦的表情，好像是因为刚刚重重地跌倒过的缘故吧。右边有好几排英文字母， 上面写的好像是这只猫的自述。虽然不能完全看懂，但是我也能翻译几句话。文具盒全身绿色，但因时间长生了锈和我在上面贴了贴画的缘故，使它变得与一点儿杂乱了。

　　打开盖子，里面装满了学习用品。文具盒分为上、中、下三层。上面一层“睡着”两支水笔，一支是蓝的，一支是黑的。它们“躺”在一把绿色的铁质直尺上，一点儿声音都没有，好像正在酣睡。中层里“横”着一个蓝色的橡皮，放着两支短得快不能使用的铅笔和一支闪亮的红色水笔。下层因为空间小，就在里面“藏”着一些笔芯。

　　文具盒虽然是用来供我学习用的，但是这个庞大的盒下，还“躲”着四个小轮子，只要将文具盒轻轻一推，它就能平稳地向前驶去。因为它比较长，再加上下面有“乘客”们便陆续下车，帮助我学习。

　　我的文具盒给我带来了欢乐，我爱我的文具盒。

　　点评：

　　1.文章通过对文具盒的详尽描写，体现出小作者对它的喜爱之情。文章按照由外而内、由上至下的顺序，将文具盒的外表图画、内部构造及放置的物品描述得具体全面。内容丰富，层次分明，结构完整。

　　2.语言运用精妙，用丰富的词语来表现文具盒内物品的摆放状态，如“睡着”、“横”、“藏”......对小轮子的描写采用了“躲”字，既生动又准确。

　　3.文章的描写生动形象，比喻贴切。语言自然流畅，叙述有条不紊，整体感强。

　　英文翻译

　　My Cases

　　The stationery is my mother bought me a year ago, although it has "old", but I still cherish it.

　　My stationery is made with iron. In his hand, the first thing that catches the eye is the top draw. Left lying on the floor there is a large cat face, it presents a face expression of pain, it seems to be because just fall too heavily because of it. On the right there are several rows of letters, written above seems to be the cat readme. Although we can not fully understand, but I can translate a few words. Stationery green body, but time longevity rusty and I have posted above the sticker's sake, it becomes a little messy.

　　Open the lid, filled with school supplies. Stationery divided into upper, middle and lower layers. Layer above the "sleeping" two pens, one is blue, one is black. They "lie" on a green iron ruler, a little voice did not, like being asleep. Middle in "horizontal" with a blue rubber, stood a shiny red pencil and pen two short fast can not be used. Lower because of the small space, on the inside, "hiding" some refills.

　　Although the stationery is used for me to learn to use, but in this huge box, and "hide" the four small wheels, as long as the stationery little push, it can smoothly drove forward. Because it is relatively long, plus the below "passengers" who will have to get off and help me learn.

　　My Cases brought me joy, I love my stationery.

　　Reviews:

　　1. Through an exhaustive description of stationery, reflecting its small author's affection. Articles from outside to inside in accordance with the order from top to bottom, and the picture looks stationery, internal structure and placement of objects is described as a specific and comprehensive. Content-rich, structured, structural integrity.

　　2. exquisite use of language, with a wealth of words to express stationery items placed within the state, such as "asleep", "horizontal", "Tibet" ...... on small wheels description using the "hide" word, both vivid and accurate.

　　3. vivid description of the article, apt analogy. Natural language fluency, methodical narrative, the overall sense.