中考英语作文高分写作技巧
中考英语作文高分写作技巧:要点+结构+逻辑+语法+亮点
要点:实际上中考[微博]英语写作就等于两个字,翻译!因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点,要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好,只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点,也就是文章的第二段内容,要做到全,围绕中心。
结构:中考最流行的结构就是三段式,深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么尼?因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段:简单明了,开门见山,不超过2句话,如,我们想表达小强很强壮,第一段直接说XQis extremely strong。观点明确,这一句足矣。
第二段:分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1. 每天吃10顿饭,He has ten mealseveryday!详举吃的是什么。2. 每天运动2小时,He does exercise 2 hours a day!详举做了什么运动。
第三段:经过第二段的论证,可以得出结论。但请注意,不能完全照抄第一段,要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如,Howstrong and robust XQ is!I hope to be him one day!
逻辑:这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的,转折的,总结的逻辑词等。递进:除了 first,second,third,finally等还可以使用高级点的,如first of all(首先),in addition,what'smore,moreover(都是另外的意思),in a word,all inall(表示总结的)。转折:but,yet,however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词,因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。
语法:其他几点都不是硬性的要求,不那样做不能说是错,只能说是不好,但是语法却是硬性的。如,单词的使用,时态等。
亮点:当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文,最后两个字,亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前,都是结构清晰的三段式,要点都很全,都用了一些逻辑词,都没有语法错误,但是A篇只用了 beautiful,good-looking,B篇却用到了attractive,charming,catching等,我坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇,词组,句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以,以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。
中考英语作文高分写作范文一:Make Track for a Star
At present more and more students chase stars,especially many middle school students.
When it comes the problem of star-worshipping,people hold the different ideas. Some people agreewith star-worshipping. There are many reasons.Firstly, it's fashionable for students to discuss stars'things among their classmates. Secondly, they canrealize more culture. Thirdly, they can study stars'advantages and achieve our own aim extremelyhard. However, others are against the idea above.They think that star-worshipping costs a lot of moneyand time. They blindly worship easily and lose direction. They coda imitate stars and easilyget bad habit. Even, they waste school work.
In my opinion, star-worshipping is a bad thing. Tow reasons can explain my idea. On the onehand, we spend a lot of afford to understand the stars' entertainment news. On the otherhand. It affects our study. After all, it's very important for us to have our own career. In a word,we must have a rational way to worship star .
中考英语作文高分写作范文二:A letter to the fans
Dear friends,
Recently, there are many fans of teenagers. They aretalking about their favorite stars all day instead ofstudying hard. As a teenager like them, I want to saysomething to them.
Firstly, it's a waste of money. Our student can'tmake money. We just spend our parents' money tolive and study. We know our parents aren't easy tomake money. They need to work day and night. Weshouldn't use the money to buy the CDs or go to theconcert.
Secondly, it's a waste of time. Our time is precious. If we pay too much attention on the stars,we have no time to study. How can we learn the knowledge to contribute our country!
Thirdly, some stars don't have positive influence. Some of them are rude. Some of them eventake drugs.
So don't do that again. Be yourselves.
Yours sincerely,
Xia Wenying