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中考英语提示性作文写作攻略

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  中考英语提示性作文写作攻略如下:

  提示性作文:就是给出一个标题或无标题,给出具体的内容,规定一定的字数,让考生写出作文。由于这类作文已经规定了文章的中心思想和主要内容,因此考生可以不再列出提纲,只要把注意力集中在如何正确、完整地用英文词句表达出中心思想和内容就可以了。

  写好提示性作文应注意的事项:

  1、仔细审题,明确要求。对所给信息反复阅读,弄清这个题目要表达什么,然后对所给信息进行整理、组织,按照自己的写作思路使之条理化。

  2、确保语言精炼。在写作过程中,考生应时刻提醒自己按照已给出的信息点去写,不必有太多的发挥。但也不必按照信息点去逐句翻译。用自己熟悉的短语、句型去体现要点。掌握好文章的长度,不要字数过多或过少。

  一、汉语提示

  根据中文提示和英文提示词语,写一篇意思连贯、符合逻辑的短文。所给英文提示词语必须用上。字数60~70左右。

  1、昨天晚上我和妈妈出去散步。

  2、在路上我遇到了一个外国人。

  3、他向我询问去温泉饭店(the Hot Spring Hotel)的路。

  4、我告诉他沿着路往前走,在第三个转弯处向左拐就能看见饭店。

  5、他非常感谢我,我也为能帮他而感到高兴。

  提示词语:go out for a walk, on the road, the way to, walk along, on the left, thank for, be happy that(分析)

  写作指导:根据提示我们了解到这是一篇记叙文,所以考生应马上想到时间(yesterday evening),地点(on the road),人物(I, my mother and a foreigner),事件(how to show the way)。其次观察信息点,我们确定这篇文章应用过去式来表达。然后,确定这个事件应用第一人称来叙述。最后,按照信息点合理组织文章,别忘用上提示词语。

  (例文)

  Yesterday evening, I went out for a walk with my mother. On the road, we met a foreigner.

  He asked me the way to the Hot Spring Hotel. I told him to walk along the road and take the third turning on the left, Then he could see the hotel. He thanked me very much for my help. I was happy that I could help him.

  二、英语提示(云南未考过这类作文形式,学生可大略看一哈!)

  你收到一封咨询信,请你以旅行社工作人员的身份完成任务。

  Dear Ace Travel,

  I'm Li Ming, from the east of China. For the coming winter vacation, my family and I want to spend our vacation in a foreign city for ten days. We would like to go somewhere not only warm but also interesting. We don't mind how far we have to go. It has to be a place where we can swim everyday, and it would be nice if our hotel is not expensive but clean and comfortable. We like to pay no more than $ 5,000 for the trip. Could you please give us your suggestions for vacation spots?

  Thanks a lot.

  Yours,

  Li Ming

  请你根据来信,从下列所给的地方中选择一个或两个符合Li Ming要求的地方,向他提出建议。(80字左右)Tokyo, Sydney, Hawaii, Shanghai

  写作指导:这篇作文结合了提示性作文和应用文的写作要求。首先,我们要读懂英语提示的内容,也就是那封咨询信的内容。其次,我们要知道书信的写作方法。针对本道题,还要注意,这封信是以旅行社工作人员的身份来写的。最后,还要注意咨询信后的要求----从下列所给的地方中选择一个或两个符合Li Ming要求的地方,向他提出建议及字数限制。

  下面,我们来看看范文是怎么写的。

  One Possible version:

  Dear Li Ming,

  I'm Gina. It's my pleasure to give you some suggestions for your vacation spots. According to your letter, I think either Sydney or Hawaii is the best choice because they are both warm and interesting. There are some inexpensive hotels, which are clean and comfortable in both places. What's more, you can enjoy sunshine, walk on the beach and swim every day.

  Besides, there are many good museums in Sydney. (It's also a wonderful place for shopping. )And if you go to Hawaii, you could have a visit to Pearl Harbor, which is quite educational and historical. (And you can also enjoy exotic dances. )

  That's just my idea. I hope it would give you some help.

  Yours,

  Gina

  对于,提示作文的写法大家都会了吗?不管什么作文的写作,都要要求我们对英语的词汇、短语以及常用的表达方法有一定的积累。所以,在学习写作的同时,不要放松对以上几个方面的复习。

  英语写作是中考中检测学生语言应用能力的最重要部分。

  提高中考写作水平,需要有效的训练。正确无误的造句能力和各种文体的写作技巧,两者缺一不可。

  正确无误的造句能力,首先可以从替换单词、扩词造句训练,做到有效积累,扩大视野,灵活运用。

  如:如何修饰一个最简单、最常用的"说"?我们就可以写出许多:say some thing gladly(merrily excitedly sadly kindly worriedly loudly sweetly timidly bravely confidently)

  还可说say some thing in a friendly way.替换了一个副词,生动地表达了说话时的不同心情。

  扩词有:play football--play foot ball in the play ground--play football in the play ground with my friends--play football in the play ground with my friends after school.对其中的动词我们还可替换成play games,play the piano…等,后面的状语都可以有相应的更换。

  又如:a friend--my friend--my close friend--my close friend named Mary.以此类推,我们可以模仿着进行扩句训练。The students love life.--The students of Class One love enjoyable school life very much.为了避免句型的重复,我们还可以转换不同的句型,来表达同一内容。如:The dictionary is so big that it doesn't fit in tony pocket.--The dictionary is too big to fit into my pocket.--The dictionary is not small enough to fit into my pocket.

  这样训练写句的方法,可以帮助学生克服心里先想好中文,然后逐字翻译的不良习惯,从而造的句子符合英语表达的习惯。

  在平时的学习中,我们可以试着用课文中所学的句型和词汇,设计一些中译英句子,虽然对初中学生有一定的难度,但长此以往可以有效地掌握正确的句子结构,巩固所学词汇,做到活学活用,为中考作文作好铺垫。

  针对所学的句型和学生日常学习生活的真实情景,设计了许多中译英,如:

  1.尽管我的爷爷奶奶已80多岁了,他们还能每天早上坚持锻炼。(although…)

  2.你与其他同学不同,你总是喜欢独自一人呆在家里。(be different from)

  3.去天目山参观是一件很开心的事。(It's fun…)

  4.我有个建议,把我们旧的书报杂志送给班级阅览角,这样同学们就会有更多的书可以分享。(suggestion)

  5.在暴风雨中,我们最好不放风筝,因为它可能让我们触电。(because, get a electric shock)

  6.新的隧道将把上海和崇明岛连接起来。(linkup…with)

  7.这位驾驶员从这次事故中吸取了教训。(learn a lesson)

  8.我们赢了这场比赛,他们看上去很失望。(win,look)

  9.你们校运会准备工作进展如何?(get on with…)

  10.我们盼望着2008年的北京奥运会.(look forward to)有了扎实的组词、造句能力,要写好一篇中考作文,就如同裁缝做服装准备好了上等的面料,如果学生对中考中可能出现的各种文体的格式,一般行文规律能了解掌握,那么中考作文定能获得满意的成绩。

  中考英语提示性作文写作范文:

  根据中文大意,写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的短文。

  假设你叫王明,昨天收到了笔友David的e-mail,得知他不久要到北京来学习中文。他想了解如何学好中文。请你用英文给他回复一封e-mail,介绍学习中文的体会和方法,提出你的建议,以及表达你帮助他学好中文的愿望。

  Dear David,

  I'm glad you'll come to Beijing to learn Chinese. Chinese is very useful, and many foreigners are learning it now. It's difficult for you because it's quite different from English. You have to remember as many Chinese words as possible. It's also important to do some reading and writing. You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practise your

  listening. Do your best to talk with people in Chinese. You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you. If you have any questions, please ask me. I'm sure you'll learn Chinese well.

  Hope to see you soon in Beijing.

  Yours,

  Wang Ming

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