中考英语作文高分四诀窍

　　一、审题明确

　　范文：

　　I went hiking to a mountain with my friends last summer.(开头点题是去年发生的一次短途旅行)It was a good trip at the beginning but something unexpected happened on the half way.One of my friends suddenly felt a terrible pain in his stomach and he couldn’t move any further.Nobody knew what to do.One girl tried to call her mum with her mobile phone but there was no signal in the mountain area.Luckily we brought a tent with us.We put it up and let him rest in it.He took some medicine.Then he drank some water.and ate some food.After a while，he felt much better and we walked on.(描述在这次短途旅行中发生了意外的事情，最后大家是怎么解决的)We all enjoyed ourselves on the top of the mountain.(最后再次总结这次旅行大家都很开心。)

　　二、用好连接词

　　根据评分准则，有效地使用语句间的连接成分，使全文紧凑，是第五档(21-25分)的要求之一。将句子用合适的词连接成段落，并将前后的表述整理通顺，是作文流畅紧凑的关键。

　　我们学过很多连接词，例如：

　　表示罗列、增加：first, second, third, first, then, next, after that, what’s more, In addition, furthermore, moreover, another, also, especially, in particular

　　表示时间顺序：now, at present, recently, after, afterwards, after that, after a while, in a few days

　　表示解释说明：now, in addition, for example, for instance, in this case, more over, furthermore, in fact, actually

　　表示转折关系：but, however, while, though, or, otherwise, on the contary, on the other hand

　　表示并列关系：or, and, also, too, not only…but also, as well as, both…and, either…or, neither...nor

　　表示因果关系：because, because of, since, now that, as, thanks to…, due to…, therefore, as a result(of) , otherwise, so…that, such…that

　　这些连词都可以运用到写作当中去。

　　下面我们再来看一篇范文。

　　Save Energy

　　To save energy，I’11 start from the following points.First，it’s best to catch a bus or ride a bike to school.Second，I will remember to turn off the lights when we leave the classroom.Next，in my free time，I will collect the empty bottles and waste paper for recycling.Also I won’t spend too much money on expensive things. Last but not the least，I should stop the water tap running all the time.By doing all these，I hope I can do something for our society.

　　这篇作文就用了很多连接词让文章连贯而流畅。

　　你能一一找出来吗?

　　三、详略得当，突出重点

　　一篇洋洋洒洒却毫无中心的作文无论如何是拿不到高分的。一篇优秀的英语作文，一定要有突出的中心思想，文章内容的安排要有详有略。

　　在文章的框架确定后，对内容的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，安排详略。面面俱到使情节罗列化，导致作文平淡而缺乏重点。而突出重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那些非关键的次要情节，是写好作文、表现主题的关键。我们可以来读一篇满分作文，以更深刻地了解怎样突出作文的重点。 The Christmas Day

　　December 25th is the Christmas Day.Before Christmas, my friends suggested to have a party.But I don’t think it was creative enough.So we decided to go hiking to the country.On that day，my friends came to my house early.We all brought each other different kinds of gifts，such as books，cards，calendars，photo album，and Wanglin even sent me a stuffed pig.Soon we started our trip.We found it beautiful and funny to be out of the school.The cloud，the sunshine，the trees，flowers and the grass…all the things were interesting.They all said the Christmas was special and funny.

　　这篇记叙文，有详有略地记叙了大家是怎样度过圣诞节的。略写了大家决定去郊游，而详细写了互送礼物的情节和郊游所见的景色。

　　四、常用点睛

　　正确地运用好复杂的词汇和句型，会使你的作文生动形象，脱颖而出。

　　1.适当地使用词组、习语来代替单词，避免适用重复的单词

　　如表达“他兴趣广泛”，我们可以用：He has many interests.但是如果我们将“many”改为“a variety of”。He has a variety of interests.就显得富有文采了。

　　为了避免使用某一个单词，我们可以选择它的同义词来代替。如：I like reading while my sister likes playing football.这个句子中，用了两个“like”，我们可以用“like”的同义词“enjoy”代替其中一个“like”，句子变为：I like reading while my sister enjoys playing football.这样，句子就生动一些了。

　　2.使用不同的句型，使句子丰富多彩起来

　　下面我们来看一篇运用了丰富句子的范文，来学习怎样将句子写好。

　　Study at School or at Home?

　　1、Thanks to the internet，we can study not only at school but also at home now.

　　2、Although many people think those who have online lessons are just copying their homework instead of leaning anything，information on the internet can be very useful if we are willing to get more knowledge.

　　3、 A teacher may be better for US to ask questions and to explain what we don’t understand.However，teachers in big classes are often not able to pay attention to every student，and some students may be afraid to communicate with the teachers.

　　4、So as for me, I prefer online learning to having classes at school.

　　句子1 ：改变了按主谓宾顺序构成的句子开头，将状语提到句子的开头，非常新颖。

　　句子 2 ：灵活运用了复杂句，包括宾语从句，if引导的原因状语从句。

　　句子 3 ：宾语从句的运用，增加了句子的连续性，达到了更好的表达效果。

　　句子 4 ：“So as for me”很好地连接了上下文，概括总结了自己的观点。

　　通过上面的总结，可见“审题明确”“用好连接词”“详略得当，突出重点”以及“常用点睛句”是英语作文获得高分的诀窍。掌握好这四个诀窍，你也能写出高分英语作文!

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